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awash mods ([personal profile] awashmods) wrote in [community profile] awashooc2018-07-15 07:00 pm
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How's My Driving?





Hello everyone, and welcome to July's HMD!

This is a safe space for constructive criticism, encouragement and feedback. Please post your character's name, canon and journal, as well as anything that you feel may be useful for your fellow players to know (such as things you would like to improve on or are currently working on!). Awash's HMDs are not mandatory, but we hope everyone will feel comfortable using it to work on things together!

Anonymous commenting is enabled, but will be turned off if it is abused; please be courteous and reasonable when giving and receiving criticism. The comment for the mods can be found here, so please feel free to let us know if there's anything we can be working on improving, or that you'd like to see change about the game!

Thank you!
swordfucker: (6)

[personal profile] swordfucker 2018-07-16 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
I just wanted to say you guys have been awesome so far! I appreciate the openness and willingness you have to work with players who want to explore more of the setting. I feel like we're in a small setting but there's always plenty to work with because you let us go out in the forest, or dive under water, or...make drugs...

The point is!! Working with you is always incredibly easy. I never feel like it's too much to ask you guys anything, and since I have a character who's very much the type to do 5 million things it has been a blessing to have both direction and freedom.

I've also loved all of the quests so far, and the rewards are always so fun! The only thing I can think to say is that this month has felt a little slow as far as things to do, but I know that you did announce you're trying two mini events to help with new characters coming in, instead of one large event, and I don't want to say much more on that until I see the second mini event. You guys have been wonderful with communicating and being open to suggestions, so I'm not worried at all.

But thank you guys for all that you do and know you're doing great! ♥

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Ash

[personal profile] swordfucker 2018-07-16 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
Guren Ichinose | Owari no Seraph | [personal profile] swordfucker | HMD

I'd also love if anyone gave me feedback on defense force stuff! I try to keep it optional and open and a chance for CR, but if anything is weird or difficult, I'd like to know. Thanks!
Edited 2018-07-16 01:15 (UTC)
troubadamsel: (Default)

[personal profile] troubadamsel 2018-07-16 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Maribelle [personal profile] troubadamsel Fire Emblem : Awakening.

If you'd like to go anon/private, I have a post for that!
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mary

[personal profile] passio 2018-07-16 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
dextera | baroque | [personal profile] passio

hello everyone! i’m open to any and all kinds of feedback. something i’m really planning to buckle down on is tagging out more since i’ve been running in the same CR circle for a while now…!

but if there’s anything else you have for me please bring it up! also feel free to PM me privately if you have other concerns. or… my personal/private/screened HMD is also here!
Edited 2018-07-16 01:18 (UTC)
messianic: (A fire of pale desire in incompleteness)

[personal profile] messianic 2018-07-16 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
Minato Arisato | Persona 3 | [personal profile] messianic

His personal HMD is over here! Thanks, guys!
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elia

[personal profile] thriftea 2018-07-16 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
Ochako Uraraka | My Hero Academia | [personal profile] thriftea | Screened HMD

June was a bit of a Hot Mess for me in terms of RL/keeping track of everything, so I know there were things I dropped and/or forgot about. Sorry, y'all! I'm trying to do a better job this month.
Edited 2018-07-16 01:33 (UTC)
bittybat: (pic#12365082)

[personal profile] bittybat 2018-07-16 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Damian Wayne ● DC Comics ● [personal profile] bittybat

Let me know about anything really whether it's regarding me personally or Damian! There's a private and anon HMD on this journal, too, if that's more convenient.
lonered: (s43)

[personal profile] lonered 2018-07-16 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Keith | Voltron | [personal profile] lonered

His screened/private HMD is here, if you'd rather.
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[personal profile] doublesharp 2018-07-16 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
Riku Nanase | IDOLiSH7 | [personal profile] doublesharp | Personal HMD

I'm still in Japan for a few more days, as I have been all month, so thanks for bearing with me until my hiatus is over! Once it is, I'll be more than happy to backtag for all eternity!
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jamie

[personal profile] unghost 2018-07-16 01:19 am (UTC)(link)
Cairngorm | Houseki no Kuni | [personal profile] unghost

journal hmd can be found here! i'm open to all types of concerns... thank you!
whichcraft: murder, arson, and jaywalking, presumably (INNOCENT ♚ what can one little girl do)

Alex!

[personal profile] whichcraft 2018-07-16 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
Ignis Scientia | Final Fantasy XV | [personal profile] unfatalist
Summer Moran | Original | [personal profile] whichcraft

Known possible issues are that I don't always have a lot of time to tag on weekdays on account of my job, but I hope I'm doing okay at being available and approachable. I'm always happy to plot things with people and I sometimes worry that the time constraints result in me not being as engaged with people as I'd like to be. But please let me know if you have feedback!
heartsteals: (i think i better sit down)

[personal profile] heartsteals 2018-07-16 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
Arsène Lupin / Code: Realize / [personal profile] heartsteals / personal

don't be shy, i love crit
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lacie

[personal profile] catlady 2018-07-16 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
selina kyle (catwoman), dc comics - [personal profile] sexual; i also have a hmd post over here.

right off the bat (haha), i know i can be painfully slow at times and i am really making an effort to prioritize game tags over everything else. i thank you all for your patience -- it has been a joy to be in game with you all! ♥
Edited (wow, i can type!! f u summer brain) 2018-07-16 02:35 (UTC)
foeyay: (x-ray moves)

[personal profile] foeyay 2018-07-16 01:27 am (UTC)(link)
Kamui | Gintama | [personal profile] foeyay | Personal HMD
asano_san: (fighting spirit)

[personal profile] asano_san 2018-07-16 01:29 am (UTC)(link)
Keigo Asano | Bleach | ancient journal hmd post
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lucy

[personal profile] parodeity 2018-07-16 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
dave strider | homestuck | [personal profile] parodeity | personal hmd

last month was a bit of a wash for tags as was the start of this since i was moving and then mobile on vacation and had some health issues, but i'm back around and on top of things again; i've dropped annabeth so i can focus on dave's voice and cr for the time being.
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Alisa

[personal profile] brightlyshines 2018-07-16 01:31 am (UTC)(link)
Estelle Bright | Legend of Heroes: Trails in the Sky | [personal profile] brightlyshines | HMD

Would love feedback! I know I haven't been as active as I like, that's RL issues combined with burnout caused by them unfortunately, but I'm working on getting back into things!
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Adrien

[personal profile] sirnyxalot 2018-07-16 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
I play Nyx Ulric [personal profile] sirnyxalot and while I just brought in an OC I unfortunately haven't had much time to really get him out there so Phoenix will have to wait until next time.

I'm very open to anon, but I prefer knowing who is asking me to improve so that I have context for which actions I am falling short on. If you'd rather not critique me publicly please feel free to send a PM so we can talk. I'd rather have the opportunity to fix something I've done than accidentally keep doing it and drive people away.

In before the biggest one: Tagging frequency. Letting tagbacks go too long is a known problem than I fully admit to. I am working to improve it so all I ask is continued patience. If something is time sensitive for you, ie. quest threads, please don't feel awkward about poking at me for a reply. Sometimes I forget that I need to do something or have trouble realizing how much time has passed. I apologize and am extremely grateful to everyone for their kindness while I take the steps I need to improve. <3
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Laci

[personal profile] crowsigliere 2018-07-16 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
Kyrie | Ozmafia!! | [personal profile] crowsigliere | Personal HMD
Hans Humpty | Rokka no Yuusha | [personal profile] purrodigy | Personal HMD

I think I set up the HMDs right, but please let me know if anything's weird or wonky with them. I'm still learning how to do things around here...!

I'm definitely open to constructive criticism, so please let me know if there's anything I can be doing better!! I'm also extremely new to DW still, so I'm open to some advice on that front as well.

I know my biggest fault right now is probably maintaining threads, and I definitely hope to improve on that during my time here!! I'm very forgetful and often think I replied to something when I haven't, so please don't hesitate to remind me if I've left something untagged for a while. In the meantime though, I do want to say that I love and enjoy all of my dumb boys' CR and appreciate everyone's patience during my slow periods. ;v;
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Kohaku

[personal profile] youwillbeunequaled 2018-07-16 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
Tonbokiri - Touken Ranbu - [personal profile] youwillbeunequaled

Open to everything ^.^
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Laura

[personal profile] pursestrings 2018-07-16 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
hey it's cha girl

just okuyasu here, also he has a journal hmd too
osuni: (SNUGGLES)

yaywon

[personal profile] osuni 2018-07-16 02:08 am (UTC)(link)
I just got accepted with Okuni, but hit me up!! Here's her journal HMD post.
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Ruby

[personal profile] doublecrowss 2018-07-16 02:15 am (UTC)(link)
Goro Akechi | Persona 5 | screened HMD

It's my first time playing a character like Akechi, so any and all feedback would be much appreciated! Thanks!
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Ty

[personal profile] windeity 2018-07-16 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
John Egbert | Homestuck | [personal profile] windeity | Personal HMD
Percy Jackson | Riordan Chronicles | [personal profile] hydrokinetics | Personal HMD

I've been really off my game due to a combination of things so please feel free to point out anything you have for me. Thanks!
inheritance: (15)

[personal profile] inheritance 2018-07-16 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Izuku Midoriya | My Hero Academia | [personal profile] inheritance

I also have a private HMD if you'd prefer that instead!
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[personal profile] tendershepherd 2018-07-16 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
So let me just start by saying, you're a really sweet person??? RPing with you is a delight and I never feel judged when playing with you, so that's extra nice.

You also portray Izuku really well, I feel? I'm canon familiar and just, given all the stuff that's happened in-game, Izuku still feels and acts very much like Izuku to me. So you're doing a great job on that front!

Mm.....I wanted to give at least some kind of critique for you, but I honestly can't think of anything that I've personally experienced with you that feels like it needs improvement....so keep up the great work?? vhfbvdf

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